Autumn & Winter | Tanka’s three
Orange yellow brown
Autumn colors on the ground
Started on the trees
Finished with a winter freeze
Fodder now for worms too please
Autumn all ablaze
Misty foggy breezy days
Some leaves hanging on
Winter shortens autumns tease
Frost and snow hard winter takes
Kids kick autumn leaves
Into flurries sights to please
Orange red gold sees
Winter now so cold and white
Snowballs snowmen a delight
I think I have tanka’ed right, if haven’t please let me know, perhaps I’ll have another go.
Using the middle line as the end of the first sentence, then the beginning of the next.
Orange, yellow, brown, autumn colors on the ground, started on the trees.
Started on the trees, finished with a winter freeze, fodder now, for worms too please.
Autumn all ablaze, misty foggy breezy days, some leaves hanging on.
Some leaves hanging on, winter shortens autumns tease, frost, and snow, hard winter takes
Kids kick autumn leaves, into flurries, sights to please, orange, red, gold, hues
Orange, red, gold, hues, winter now, so cold, and white, snowballs, snowmen a delight