An Haikui – Senryui – Anthology

BIRDS OF A FEATHER

Another attempt at haiku and senryu. I know there are many of you out there in cyber space who have light years of experience in the composing of haiku and senryu, I would love some constructed critiques from you, please.

A Haiku – Senryu Anthology

by

Mick Talbot

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birds of a feather
we truly are both moulded
sparking  flames fired

*

moorland strife
natural flash fires
natures cooking
*
birds of a feather
a lesson for man
supposedly intelligent
*
one of a kind
are birds of a feather
putin may trump
*
the moorland alive
the death toll heightens
despicable shooters
*
moorland bounty
berries fungi deer birds
fear hounds them all
*
hunter gatherers
relying on nature to live
short memories confounded
*
putin may trump
birds ready for cooking
the worlds oven ready
*
putin may trump
the bathrooms ready
please do drop in
*
faces all glazed
putin may trump
staring into the void
*
angels lay down
soft clouds transporters
new lands don’t dismiss
*
holy night silent night
someone is not telling the truth
bells ringing ln the sky
*
tonight be jolly
tra la a la la la la
have a humbug
*
l love Christmas
may trump and putin too
make goodwill a gift
*
my words i will not
once layed on paper scrap
inspirations kept
*
i thank all kindly
folk for how they inspired
bespoke  haiku words
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All by Mick Talbot © 2016/17

Partly inspired by drycrikjournal

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