The Sun – Haibun

The sun is poetically sound. Caught me hook line and sinker, Your words did truly expound, the virtue of a paper blinkered. Torn to shreds, yet words you found, poetically and, justifiably tinkered. Yet by the sun all life is surely bound. Your title did my first thoughts clinker. Now I have read all, your opinions are sound, thanks for your censure

tis not what is read
life is how it is perceived
confusing angles


© Mick Talbot

Dedicated to and inspired by Jordan Reynolds

Do click on the link, you will see how I was caught out by Jordan’s title, thanks for reading.


2 Comments Add yours

  1. LiteraryFuzz says:

    Thank you for the dedication, Mick. This is a brilliant haibun and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Mick Talbot says:

      My pleasure, thank you too.

      Liked by 1 person

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