haibun, Haiku, Nature, POETRY

The Sun – Haibun

Posted by Mick Talbot on

The sun is poetically sound. Caught me hook line and sinker, Your words did truly expound, the virtue of a paper blinkered. Torn to shreds, yet words you found, poetically and, justifiably tinkered. Yet by the sun all life is surely bound. Your title did my first thoughts clinker. Now I have read all, your opinions are sound, thanks for your censure

tis not what is read
life is how it is perceived
confusing angles

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© Mick Talbot

Dedicated to and inspired by Jordan Reynolds

Do click on the link, you will see how I was caught out by Jordan’s title, thanks for reading.

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2 Comments Add yours

  1. LiteraryFuzz says:
    January 23, 2017 at 9:08 pm

    Thank you for the dedication, Mick. This is a brilliant haibun and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
    1. Mick Talbot says:
      January 23, 2017 at 9:09 pm

      My pleasure, thank you too.

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply

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